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Rulaizong
- ... that believers of Rulaizong use the phrase "Thanking Master, Praising Master" to praise the founder of the religion?
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... that Rulaizong is criticized for attracting believers in a direct marketing way in Taiwan?
Created by Billytanghh (talk). Self-nominated at 08:44, 18 February 2016 (UTC).
I removed some pictures from the {{external media}} template, because only images which are really really interesting and not available freely should be put there. A bunch of forms aren't interesting, and neither is a revolving door. I've left two pictures in there (depicting a congegration worshipping). With regards to the rest of the article, it seems to check out (albeit having to assume good faith on the sources; I don't speak Chinese). It's long enough, new enough, QPQ has been done and the hook seems interesting. I can't support this yet, though, because the hook is not directly cited.—♦♦ AMBER(ЯʘCK) 12:29, 13 March 2016 (UTC)
- Template:PingIs this hook OK?--Billytanghh (talk) 18:53, 14 March 2016 (UTC)
- No, that hook has the words "in Taiwan" kind of dangling at the end. What was wrong with your first hook? I liked that one, it just needs to have an inline citation directly behind the sentence that established said fact. —♦♦ AMBER(ЯʘCK) 19:28, 14 March 2016 (UTC)
- Template:PingIs that OK?--Billytanghh (talk) 02:24, 15 March 2016 (UTC)
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I did a thorough copyedit on the article to bring it up to English grammar. Template:Ping could you look it over to make sure everything is correct before we promote it? Thanks, Yoninah (talk) 22:30, 15 March 2016 (UTC)
- Template:PingThe phrase "verbal persuasion" had changed to "verbal warning".--Billytanghh (talk) 23:42, 15 March 2016 (UTC)
- Thank you. One more question about the hook: what does "grating" mean? Google Translate has it as "Thanksgiving Master, praise the Master", which also doesn't make much sense. Yoninah (talk) 23:46, 15 March 2016 (UTC)
- Template:PingIs that OK?--Billytanghh (talk) 02:30, 16 March 2016 (UTC)
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- No, that hook has the words "in Taiwan" kind of dangling at the end. What was wrong with your first hook? I liked that one, it just needs to have an inline citation directly behind the sentence that established said fact. —♦♦ AMBER(ЯʘCK) 19:28, 14 March 2016 (UTC)