Template:Did you know nominations/Saints Row: Gat out of Hell

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Saints Row: Gat out of Hell

Created by MAinternational (talk). Nominated by Czar (talk) at 05:53, 8 September 2014 (UTC).

Symbol question.svg Preliminary review. First, things that are ok:

  • New – Created Aug 29, nominated Sept 8 = 9 days
  • Long enough – is 2,300 characters
  • Within policy – I don't see any editorializing. Sources are cited. There is no close paraphrasing or worse from the cited sources.
  • Hook – is about 100 characters
  • Hook – is neutral and does not focus on living people
  • QPQ – not self-nominated
  • Image - no image

Second, things that need fixing.

  • Within policy – 7/8 sources are cited to bare urls, I understand that this formatting should be changed.
  • Within policy – I don't know who is copying from what, but the sentence "The game's plot sees Johnny Gat and the Saints in search of the leader of the Saints who has been kidnapped by Satan." appears word for word in the imdb page for the game. There are similarly google results for "Five islands make up the city: Shantytown, Barrens, Downtown, Forge, and the Den, all surrounding Satan's tower on a middle island."
  • Hook – I think the hook might be interesting, but I'm not sure because the sentence doesn't make sense. (Probably because I don't know anything about video games.) What does it mean to "fill a level"? Is that the same as complete a level? I could see it if this meant "fulfill Satan's Wrath" or "arouse Satan's Wrath" but it seems unclear at the moment.

Third, Help?

  • Within policy – Three citations are to YouTube videos. Is the reviewer expected to watch all these videos to check for plagiarism? It would be a total of nearly 20 minutes.
  • Hook – the hook is cited to a 12 minute YouTube video. Can you provide the exact time to check it please?184.147.132.209 (talk) 17:56, 10 October 2014 (UTC)