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Sunshine Hotel
- ... that a cubicle room at the Sunshine Hotel cost about $10 a night and featured a bed, locker, light-bulb, and chicken-wire ceiling?
- ALT1:... that a cubicle room at the Sunshine Hotel cost about $10 a night, measured 4 ft × 6 ft × 7 ft (1.2 m × 1.8 m × 2.1 m), and had a bed, locker, light-bulb, and chicken-wire ceiling?
- Reviewed: Petite messe solennelle
Created by FallingGravity (talk). Self-nominated at 18:40, 18 June 2016 (UTC).
Article is new and long enough. It is interesting, neutral, well-written and cited throughout. "Earwig's Copyvio Detector" reports only 1.0 to 5.7% copyvio rates, which is acceptable. I prefer hook AKT1. It is interesting. Its length is within limit, and its fact is accurate and cited inline. QPQ was done. Everything is fine. Good to go. (Comment: An image would enrich the article and the hook.) CeeGee 07:03, 20 June 2016 (UTC)
Hook is misleading without a date, should say "cost $10 a night in 1998" (and omit the word "about" since that figure is exact). I also would not recommend using the lengthy and obtrusive and repetitive dimensions of ALT1 unless it is trimmed and squeezed to "4x6x7 ft" (skip the conversion – it's just too obtrusive any way you type it in my opinion). Softlavender (talk) 07:07, 20 June 2016 (UTC)
- The thing with the cost is that it is not an exact figure. I know a couple sources that state the price was in a certain range (something like $4.50 to $15.00), and I figured the $10 was average (hence the word about). I suppose this is what the article should say, but I'll look into it later today. FallingGravity (talk) 14:10, 20 June 2016 (UTC)
- Template:Ping I wonder what has prevented you from proposing another hook in conformity with your above issues. Because, then it would be much easier to re-approve. CeeGee 18:51, 20 June 2016 (UTC)
- The thing with the cost is that it is not an exact figure. I know a couple sources that state the price was in a certain range (something like $4.50 to $15.00), and I figured the $10 was average (hence the word about). I suppose this is what the article should say, but I'll look into it later today. FallingGravity (talk) 14:10, 20 June 2016 (UTC)