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Revision as of 19:26, 3 July 2013 by imported>Resoru (clarify)
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Ted Andrews
- ... that early in his career, Ted Andrews started an ESP club exploring extrasensory perception at the school where he taught?
- Comment: Article is newly recreated, completely rewritten, after a November 2009 deletion.
Created by Binksternet (talk). Self nominated at 15:32, 3 July 2013 (UTC).
- Okay, I explained the term with a link to Extrasensory perception. Does that cover it? Binksternet (talk) 18:46, 3 July 2013 (UTC)
- Great addition, and really clears it up. But I don't think ESP needs to be mentioned twice in the hook. How about, "started a club to explore extrasensory perception" or "started an extrasensory perception club"? The other problem, though, is that I don't think Harmony Channel is a reliable source. The Wikipedia article on Harmony Channel is unsourced. CaseyPenk (talk) 19:26, 3 July 2013 (UTC)