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Ted Andrews

  • Comment: Article is newly recreated, completely rewritten, after a November 2009 deletion.

Created by Binksternet (talk). Self nominated at 15:32, 3 July 2013 (UTC).

  • It's not immediately clear what ESP is, especially since the ESP article is a disambiguation page. CaseyPenk (talk) 17:51, 3 July 2013 (UTC)
  • Great addition, and really clears it up. But I don't think ESP needs to be mentioned twice in the hook. How about, "started a club to explore extrasensory perception" or "started an extrasensory perception club"? The other problem, though, is that I don't think Harmony Channel is a reliable source. The Wikipedia article on Harmony Channel is unsourced. CaseyPenk (talk) 19:26, 3 July 2013 (UTC)
  • Hmmm. I don't think I can defend the interview source as quickly as I can propose another hook. Let's see how this second version works, cited to a scholarly journal which discusses Andrews and his most famous book. Binksternet (talk) 20:51, 3 July 2013 (UTC)
  • ALT1: ... that Ted Andrews' best-selling book Animal Speak aims to help the reader learn how "to listen with animal ears and to see through animal eyes"?