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The California Field Atlas, Obi Kaufmann

Improved to Good Article status by Brandt Luke Zorn (talk). Self-nominated at 22:38, 23 May 2019 (UTC).

  • Symbol question.svg Template:U, since this nomination includes two eligible DYK articles, two QPQ credits are required. There appears to only be one listed. Flibirigit (talk) 18:03, 21 June 2019 (UTC)
  • Note: I am willing to start the full review on both nominations, once I finished at XIX Army Corps. Thanks in advance. Flibirigit (talk) 18:07, 21 June 2019 (UTC)
  • Sounds good! My mistake on the double QPQ; didn't realize I had to do two, but I'm happy to do so. I've started a DYK review at Gregory Gray, results pending feedback on my comments. I wanted to have a "complete" QPQ so that we weren't waiting on results of a separate nom, so I scrolled through the page again to see if I could find a nom that was ready to go. I found Mario Pouliot—I promise it was a coincidence that it happened to be your nomination—which I've approved. —BLZ · talk 20:33, 21 June 2019 (UTC)
  • Thanks for the update. I will get back to this hopefully on Sunday, or Monday at the latest. Flibirigit (talk) 03:41, 22 June 2019 (UTC)

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  • Regarding the infobox for Obi Kaufmann; it mentions tattoo artist as one of his occupations, followed by period of 2017 to present. I think this could be misleading, since he was a tattooing well before the recent activities for which he is notable. Flibirigit (talk) 19:22, 25 June 2019 (UTC)

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  • Good point on the Kaufmann infobox; it's confusing and imprecise. I've removed "period" from the infobox. I've added the citation to the last sentence of the second paragraph of the "Artwork" section; the paragraph was split at some point, so it would have been more clear that the final footnote of that bigger paragraph was the footnote for the whole block of text. I've added another footnote to the end of that second paragraph for clarity. Re: Future publications: I've added the source back into both articles. A past revision of the California Field Atlas page shows that this was the source used, it must have been inadvertently dropped at some point in the editing process. —BLZ · talk 19:39, 25 June 2019 (UTC)
Symbol confirmed.svg Sourcing questions have been resolved, and the changes to the infobox are sufficient. Both articles and the double hook are approved. I also feel the hook is suitable for the quirky slot in a DYK set. Thanks for the enjoyable and well-written articles. Flibirigit (talk) 20:39, 25 June 2019 (UTC)