Template:Did you know nominations/The Greens Are Gone

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The Greens Are Gone

Created by Captain Assassin! (talk). Self-nominated at 03:30, 27 June 2015 (UTC).

  • 16px Drive-by observation: The first hook isn't grammatical. Do you mean:
  • ALT2: ... that the first day of filming of The Greens Are Gone, at the historic Ralph's Chadwick Square Diner, took up only three-and-a-half pages of the script?
  • And why is that notable? Is that a lot of pages for a scene, or a little? If the latter, I would write "took up only three-and-a-half pages..." Yoninah (talk) 21:04, 28 June 2015 (UTC)
  • Yes, my bad in grammar. According to filming days (17 days), I think that's a little. --Captain Assassin! «TCG» 16:04, 29 June 2015 (UTC)
  • OK, fixed ALT2. Yoninah (talk) 22:30, 29 June 2015 (UTC)
  • 16px New enough, long enough, well sourced, neutrally written, no close paraphrasing seen. Both hooks verified and cited inline.
  • The QPQ you submitted, however, was an approval of an article while the article was at AFD, and your review was rejected. Please provide another QPQ. Yoninah (talk) 21:29, 2 July 2015 (UTC)