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The Lure (2015 film)
- ... that the 2015 Polish horror film The Lure was partly developed as a retelling of The Little Mermaid?
5x expanded by Casliber (talk) and Lugnuts (talk). Nominated by Casliber (talk) at 14:56, 22 June 2016 (UTC).
The article has been recently expanded. It is written from a neutral POV. There are appropriate inline citations. While the hook is cited, I don't think that the wording of the article and the hook reflect the intent of the original wording in the source. I think there is something a little ambiguous about the wording of the hook and the article as it stands now. Your article says that the director wanted to "build on a retelling of the Little Mermaid," and that isn't exactly clear. Is it building on a different retelling, or is it retelling the Little Mermaid itself? I like the wording in the original source that the director wanted to make a movie that "reinvented" the tale of the Little Mermaid. Maybe that's just me being a little bit picky, but I think that that section could be more clear, and the hook more "hooky."Amgisseman(BYU) (talk) 21:04, 23 June 2016 (UTC)