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Thurrock services
- ... that Thurrock services was built on top of a rubbish dump? Source: "The Department was aware that part of the Thurrock motorway service area site had previously been used for landfill waste" ([1])
- Reviewed: Trinity plantation
5x expanded by Ritchie333 (talk). Self-nominated at 15:21, 28 May 2019 (UTC).
- Template:Re Here's my review:
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- My issue with the hook is more like it's not immediately clear that the subject of the hook is a service station. I understand if there's an element of surprise that is wanted, but without context, the hook doesn't really sound that good. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 02:00, 29 May 2019 (UTC)
- It's standard British English. Sample sentence: "I've popped into Thurrock services for a quick coffee so I can get across the Dartford Crossing for free after 10". Ritchie333 (talk) (cont) 09:42, 29 May 2019 (UTC)
- My issue with the hook is more like it's not immediately clear that the subject of the hook is a service station. I understand if there's an element of surprise that is wanted, but without context, the hook doesn't really sound that good. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 02:00, 29 May 2019 (UTC)