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Revision as of 15:45, 6 May 2018 by imported>Wasted Time R (response to review)
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Unix System Laboratories
- ... that Unix System Laboratories had as a goal the creation of a "Unix for the masses"?
- ALT1:... that a goal of Unix System Laboratories was the creation of their namesake product "for the masses"?
5x expanded by Wasted Time R (talk). Self-nominated at 12:21, 5 May 2018 (UTC).
- 16px Article was expanded five-fold, and nominated for DYK in due time. It is well-written and neutral, and cites sources inline. For offline sources I AGF. The last sentence of the first paragraph under "Origins as subsidiary of AT&T" lacks citation. High-rate similarities reported in one source by "Earwig's Copyvio Detector" are not noteworthy. The hook is well-formatted, interesting (I prefer ALT1) and neutral . Its length is within limit, and its fact is cited inline. QPQ was done. I will approve after the a.m. issue is addressed. CeeGee 10:42, 6 May 2018 (UTC)
- Template:Ping Thanks for doing the review. I have added sourcing for the text in question. I have also added a couple of other things that I had neglected to incorporate earlier. Wasted Time R (talk) 15:44, 6 May 2018 (UTC)