Template:Did you know nominations/White Wonderland

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White Wonderland

Created by ViperSnake151 (talk). Self nominated at 01:53, 26 July 2013 (UTC).

  • I have not reviewed the article, but I have concerns about the effectiveness of the proposed hook. It's too vague, and it focuses too much on the non-target article. I suggest the following revision:
  • I'm okay with it if it says "previously co-organized", and if "same night" is linked to New Year's Eve (because that's a key aspect of why this makes sense). ViperSnake151  Talk  16:17, 26 July 2013 (UTC)
  • I just added "previously" to my hook suggestion. Linking to New Year's Eve is not a good idea. The purpose of a DYK hook is to get the reader to look at the new article. Links to other articles should be limited. The reader won't learn anything in particular about the hook topic by reading an article about New Year's Eve. --Orlady (talk) 17:11, 26 July 2013 (UTC)