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Ympyrätalo

Ympyrätalo from air

  • Comment: References for the hook are unfortunately in Finnish as I couldn't find English sources. It is still an interesting fact that even most of the locals don't know.

Created by Jopo (talk). Self nominated at 17:04, 1 July 2014 (UTC).

  • Symbol confirmed.svg New enough, long enough, neutral, most sentences have inline citations, I could not review Finnish sources for close paraphrasing/translation issues but did check the English language sources. Generally good but reworded one sentence that was too close to the source. Hook is generally good but "booths" is a little confusing, and it's not clear that these booths were outside the building (I was trying to figure out how cars could get inside). Hook is supported by Finnish sources (which I google translated). Suggested ALT1 above. Image looks good -- appears to be from a legit flickr account with kite photography. Calliopejen1 (talk) 18:28, 1 July 2014 (UTC)
  • Thanks, I agree your alternative hook is more clear! Jopo (talk) 05:33, 2 July 2014 (UTC)