Template:Did you know nominations/Zaccheus Mason
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Zaccheus Mason
- ... that former American football player Zaccheus Mason had no professional basketball experience before he played as an import for Barangay Ginebra in the 2014 PBA Governors' Cup?
Created by PapaJeckloy (talk). Self nominated at 22:02, 26 June 2014 (UTC).
long enough, new enough, sources checks out, qpq done, hook checks out. Good 2 go.--BabbaQ (talk) 13:46, 16 July 2014 (UTC)
I have returned this one from prep as there are instances of WP:PARAPHRASE, especially from reference 4. Gatoclass (talk) 15:07, 17 July 2014 (UTC)
I have removed the quotations and rephrased some sentences, and i added more text there, there are no paraphrase instances now, i also added more references, It's now good to go. -PAPAJECKLOY (hearthrob! kiss me! <3) (talk) 15:32, 18 July 2014 (UTC).
The article needs a copy edit for grammar and spelling. I've tagged the article.—Bagumba (talk) 02:44, 30 July 2014 (UTC)
- No grammar problems now, i have fixed it all and rewrote the whole article, everything should be fine now, i also removed the tag.-PAPAJECKLOY (hearthrob! kiss me! <3) (talk) 11:26, 30 July 2014 (UTC).
- There may be fewer grammatical problems, but I see a significant number there, so I have restored the tag. PapaJeckloy, since it's clear you don't see such issues in your own prose, please leave it to others to decide whether the template should be removed. Thanks. BlueMoonset (talk) 18:33, 30 July 2014 (UTC)
- I've also started a discussion at Talk:Zaccheus_Mason#Excessive game-by-game detail regarding excessive game-by-game detail. I do think this still has DYK potential. If additional text is needed after the detail is trimmed, info on his college basketball career can be added.—Bagumba (talk) 01:16, 31 July 2014 (UTC)
- The hook does not seem that interesting. There are many American college basketball players who will never play in the top-level NBA at home that go overseas to play basketball in other leagues.—Bagumba (talk) 01:16, 31 July 2014 (UTC)
- No grammar problems now, i have fixed it all and rewrote the whole article, everything should be fine now, i also removed the tag.-PAPAJECKLOY (hearthrob! kiss me! <3) (talk) 11:26, 30 July 2014 (UTC).