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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:26, 21 January 2020 (UTC)

Shia Wong Hip

  • ... that Hong Kong restaurant Shia Wong Hip stores hundreds, occasionally thousands, of still-alive snakes for creating snake soup?

    Source: Li, Andrea (2006-05-06). "Snake soup, anyone?". South China Morning Post. Archived from the original on 2019-12-27. Retrieved 2019-12-27.

    The article notes:

    But look a little closer and you will wonder what the tall wooden cabinet drawers are doing at the back of the room. Too high and narrow for storing cutlery and plates, yet impractical for keeping perishable foods, the wooden drawers are actually temporary shelters for hundreds, and sometimes even thousands of live snakes - ready to be made into soup.

Created by Cunard (talk). Self-nominated at 09:28, 27 December 2019 (UTC).

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  • Thank you for the review, epicgenius (talk⧼dot-separator⧽contribs)! I agree that the alternative hook is much better. Thank you for suggesting it! Cunard (talk) 05:47, 28 December 2019 (UTC)
  • Template:Re no problem. Unfortunately, per the DYK rules, I can't approve my proposed alt hook.
  • Symbol redirect vote 4.svg The alt hook will need another person to approve. Everything else should still be good to go, as per my original review. epicgenius (talk) 05:49, 28 December 2019 (UTC)
  • Symbol confirmed.svg Cool article, approving ALT1 Achaea (talk) 17:53, 30 December 2019 (UTC)
  • Symbol question.svg Hi, I came by to promote this, but the hook is a little windy and you have so much more potential for a good hook using the restaurant's own menu. Yoninah (talk) 21:14, 30 December 2019 (UTC)
  • Template:Re I didn't think the menu was that interesting of a hook. However, let me propose these:
  • ALT2: ... that Shia Wong Hip serves Cantonese cuisine made from animals such as wattle-necked softshell turtles, crocodiles, geckos, silkworms, and seahorses?
  • ALT3: ... that Shia Wong Hip sells dishes such as "fried snake balls", "barbecued snake", and "glistening snake skin casserole"? (or technically any other combination of foodstuff)
Feel free to criticize either of these. epicgenius (talk) 21:20, 30 December 2019 (UTC)
  • Template:Ping thanks for the alts, but I didn't mean listing the menu. I would write something like:
  • ALT4: ... that Hong Kong restaurant Shia Wong Hip stores hundreds of live and poisonous snakes onsite for its food preparation, as well as serves soups made of lizards, silkworms, and seahorses? Yoninah (talk) 21:28, 30 December 2019 (UTC)
Template:U, that option looks much better. Let's see what Template:Re think. epicgenius (talk) 21:31, 30 December 2019 (UTC)
  • Template:Re I tend to prefer shorter hooks, but it's well within the 200 characters, so happy with that. I would change it slightly, as it is a single soup that contains those ingredients, so maybe would phrase it as "as well as serves a soup made of lizards, silkworms, and seahorses'. Let's see what Template:Ping says. Achaea (talk) 09:12, 31 December 2019 (UTC)
  • Template:Ping shorter is certainly better when the hook is hooky. But just talking about snake cuisine is plenty hooky. Here is an amended alt:
  • ALT4a: ... that Hong Kong restaurant Shia Wong Hip stores hundreds of live and poisonous snakes onsite for its cuisine, and also serves a soup made from lizards, silkworms, and seahorses? Yoninah (talk) 11:39, 31 December 2019 (UTC)
  • Symbol confirmed.svg Definitely! I'll put a tick on it, as I think this is ready to go with ALT4a. Achaea (talk) 11:55, 31 December 2019 (UTC)
  • I think ALT4a is good. Thanks! Cunard (talk) 00:54, 1 January 2020 (UTC)