Template:Did you know nominations/Kia Steave-Dickerson

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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:37, 28 October 2017 (UTC)

Kia Steave-Dickerson

Source: "You are strongly encouraged to quote the source text supporting each hook" (and [link] the source, or cite it briefly without using citation templates)

    • ALT1':... that Kia Steave-Dickerson was described as "the funk diva" by M. Night Shyamalan for her work in his films?Source: Her behind-the-scenes work drew the attention of Academy Award-nominated director M. Night Shyamalan, who called Steave-Dickerson "the funk diva." In the book "Trading Spaces Behind the Scenes," he said "She makes our movie sets more vibrant with her exotic electricity." Steave-Dickerson happy at 'Trading Spaces'

Created by Aoba47 (talk). Self-nominated at 04:27, 20 October 2017 (UTC).

  • Hi, Template:U. I'll begin reviewing this nomination below: Lua error: expandTemplate: template "y" does not exist.
  • Thank you for your comments. I have addressed the concerns about the use of quotes, and I prefer your proposal (i.e. ALT2) as it is much more appropriate for the front page. I think that I actually had added in that detail about the dry-cleaning after putting together this DYK so I had struggled with making an interesting hook with the article that I had at that time, but I would be more than happy to have ALT2 be used for the main page. Aoba47 (talk) 23:28, 26 October 2017 (UTC)
  • Makes sense – I'm satisfied with the hook then. I still think that the number of quotes in the article is distracting. Addressing these would resolve that:
  • "She makes our movie sets more vibrant with her exotic electricity." – maybe something like "Shyamalan praised her designs and described her as 'the funk diva', recognizing the energetic presence her personality brings to his sets."?
  • "favorite part of transforming rooms on Trading Spaces is coming up with a theme and then accessioning the rooms"
  • "I'd rather not even talk about that." – vague, but the "another homeowner nightmare" is appropriate
Rhinopias (talk) 00:19, 27 October 2017 (UTC)
  • Thank you for the comments. I have removed some of the quotes and revised others. Aoba47 (talk) 01:18, 27 October 2017 (UTC)
  • Symbol confirmed.svg All set to go with ALT2. Looks good! – Rhinopias (talk) 23:27, 27 October 2017 (UTC)
  • Thank you! Aoba47 (talk) 01:01, 28 October 2017 (UTC)