Template:Did you know nominations/Liberty County Jail
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- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 21:54, 10 March 2020 (UTC)
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Liberty County Jail
- ... that Georgia Governor Lester Maddox once called the Liberty County Jail (pictured) in Hinesville, Georgia "a rotten, filthy rathole"?
5x expanded by JJonahJackalope (talk). Self-nominated at 15:51, 14 February 2020 (UTC).
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- Thanks, rephrased the close paraphrasing and added the Explore Georgia website as a citation. JJonahJackalope (talk) 15:37, 17 February 2020 (UTC)
Hi, I came by to promote this, and was wondering if you'd like to add some contrast to make this a better lead hook. Like:- ALT1: ... that Liberty County Jail (pictured) in Hinesville, Georgia, now listed on the National Register of Historic Places, was once described by the governor as "a rotten, filthy rathole"? Yoninah (talk) 14:33, 10 March 2020 (UTC)
- Yeah, I'd definitely be in favor of that change, think it reads better than the current hook. If there's anything I need to do to change it let me know, but it sounds good to me. JJonahJackalope (talk) 14:49, 10 March 2020 (UTC)
- I'm also fine with the new hook. – John M Wolfson (talk • contribs) 15:35, 10 March 2020 (UTC)
- Thank you both. Template:Ping could you review it and give it a tick please? Yoninah (talk) 16:32, 10 March 2020 (UTC)
Looks good to me! – John M Wolfson (talk • contribs) 18:57, 10 March 2020 (UTC)
