Template:Did you know nominations/Louis John Gill

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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by BobAmnertiopsisChatMe! 22:20, 28 June 2014 (UTC)

Louis John Gill

Entrance to San Diego Zoo

Created/expanded by Keizers (talk). Nominated by MelanieN (talk) at 17:23, 26 June 2014 (UTC).

Thanks for the suggestions, User:Czar. I think I have dealt with the problems; please take another look. --MelanieN (talk) 15:46, 28 June 2014 (UTC)

I'm still seeing some close paraphrasing: Template:Talkquote Template:Talkquote I'd go back to the sources and make sure that every sentence is presented as its own idea, not just in rephrased, parallel structures. "During this time", for example, should not just be replaced with another turn of phrase, but recast in such a way to be materially different from the source, etc. czar  18:52, 28 June 2014 (UTC)

OK, is that better? --MelanieN (talk) 20:03, 28 June 2014 (UTC)
Symbol confirmed.svg Yep! Hook checks out, good work, gtg czar  21:00, 28 June 2014 (UTC)