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Pencil tower
- ... that newer ultra luxury, super slender, and supertall skyscrapers in New York City (pictured) are known as pencil towers? Source: "Super-tall, super-skinny, super-expensive: the 'pencil towers' of New York's super-rich" link
- ALT1:... that super slender, and supertall skyscrapers in New York City (pictured) are known as pencil towers? Source: "Super-tall, super-skinny, super-expensive: the 'pencil towers' of New York's super-rich" link
- ALT2:... that newer slender skyscrapers in New York City (pictured) are known as pencil towers? Source: "Super-tall, super-skinny, super-expensive: the 'pencil towers' of New York's super-rich" link
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Arizona Falls
Created by Z22 (talk). Self-nominated at 23:19, 7 December 2020 (UTC).
- Lua error: expandTemplate: template "y" does not exist.
- Thank you for the review. I went back and double check each one of those ratios listed on the article and found two ratios that were not explicitly stated on the sources, so I removed those two. The remaining ratios are explicitly stated each by the first inline citation after it. I added ALT1 to shorten it per your suggestion. I also used the Earwig tool for potential copyvio and it only listed things like building names, "skyscrapers", "slenderness ratio", etc. Not sure if a specific part that could present a concern, we can address that. Z22 (talk) 07:42, 10 December 2020 (UTC)
- Template:Ping I'm not sure what else we should do to improve the article to meet the standard for the DYK. Your inputs would be appreciated. Z22 (talk) 13:52, 16 December 2020 (UTC)
- Sorry about the wait, I am extremely busy right now and have limited time to edit. All three of the hooks still aren't quite right, as they repeat "super" and don't flow well. I think you should take another shot at them. SounderBruce 05:36, 23 December 2020 (UTC)
