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Pencil tower

Pencil towers in New York City
Pencil towers in New York City
  • ... that newer ultra luxury, super slender, and supertall skyscrapers in New York City (pictured) are known as pencil towers? Source: "Super-tall, super-skinny, super-expensive: the 'pencil towers' of New York's super-rich" link
  • ALT1:... that super slender, and supertall skyscrapers in New York City (pictured) are known as pencil towers? Source: "Super-tall, super-skinny, super-expensive: the 'pencil towers' of New York's super-rich" link
  • ALT2:... that newer slender skyscrapers in New York City (pictured) are known as pencil towers? Source: "Super-tall, super-skinny, super-expensive: the 'pencil towers' of New York's super-rich" link
  • Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Arizona Falls

Created by Z22 (talk). Self-nominated at 23:19, 7 December 2020 (UTC).

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  • Thank you for the review. I went back and double check each one of those ratios listed on the article and found two ratios that were not explicitly stated on the sources, so I removed those two. The remaining ratios are explicitly stated each by the first inline citation after it. I added ALT1 to shorten it per your suggestion. I also used the Earwig tool for potential copyvio and it only listed things like building names, "skyscrapers", "slenderness ratio", etc. Not sure if a specific part that could present a concern, we can address that. Z22 (talk) 07:42, 10 December 2020 (UTC)
  • Template:Ping I'm not sure what else we should do to improve the article to meet the standard for the DYK. Your inputs would be appreciated. Z22 (talk) 13:52, 16 December 2020 (UTC)
  • Sorry about the wait, I am extremely busy right now and have limited time to edit. All three of the hooks still aren't quite right, as they repeat "super" and don't flow well. I think you should take another shot at them. SounderBruce 05:36, 23 December 2020 (UTC)
  • The ALT2 hook doesn’t have anything “super” in it at all and it seems okay to me. Maybe another editor can help with a hook suggestion. Thank you. Z22 (talk) 01:34, 25 December 2020 (UTC)